Yes I did some directions for a bag and realised the people would be terrified by the number of pages. I have realised by reading threads here most people enjoy pictures or diagrams. Personally they mean nothing to me I prefer words.
He this helps. Go through some of the tutorials here and see the things quilter write about a project .

I have written directions for a number of beading projects. As someone else said, avoiding making assumptions about what someone already knows is sometimes difficult. The suggestion to have someone else read the directions and/or use them to do the project is An excellent one. Also including pictures if you can really does help a lot.

When I was in high school, my English teacher made us write a paper on how to make a peanut butter sandwich. He made it a fun project by bringing in peanut butter, jam, and bread, and we each read our paper aloud as he pretended to be an alien from Mars and attempted to follow the directions. It was awesome and hysterical. If you did not write down simple, brainless things like "Twist off lid to the peanut butter by turning counter-clockwise" then he would be unable to make the sandwich and you got a lower grade on the paper. It really hit home to me how important it is to be very clear and concise in my instructions, and to not assume the reader knows what I'm talking about.

When I was working in insurance from time to time I helped put together instruction manuals for our computer programs. It was hard because you had to assume they user had never touched a computer before, we stopped at how to turn on the machine, but it started with how to find the program and then open it and every little step from there.

Back in 1992 a friend taught me how to make the folded star Christmas ornament, I knew I would never remember how, and this was before the days of cel phone cameras (at least for me), so I wrote out each step and drew what I could and made samples of each step when the drawing wasn't making sense. Several people were able to use it. There may have been books some where, but we couldn't find it.

You really have to take your time and it was a great suggestion to re-read it after a day or 2 to look for omissions.

It s amazing the steps we do almost unconsiously ... its not till we have to communicate with words that what seems so simple can take alot of words and diagrams to get to a clear depiction.
I have written a few directions in my time.. and I would ... so rather demonsrate than write. ..maybe thats one of the reasons U- Tube has such popularity.

No I am a horrible writer, never been my strong suit, I was always good at math and science, never writing

Yep, I've written many instructions.

If you aren't used to doing so, then I suggest you 'borrow' a friend who can 'play dumb', someone who preferably thinks differently than you do, and work together. You state your direction and she tries to follow it. That way you can actually visualize what you need for the directions to work, then you can adapt your directions.

Now we understnd when we buy a pattern and have difficulty following it. Technical writing is a skill. I don't have that skill.

Sandy

My youngest DD has a degree in technical writing. She wrote field reports for a team of geologists for a year. It's not for everyone, boredom to the point of madness.

One thing about directions that is very important and seems to be overlooked. Never assume the reader of the directions knows what they are doing. Many new quilters attempt projects that are meant for a more seasoned quilter. As many details as possible makes it easier for quilters who are relying on the directions.