I love both of them, the one on the bed is especially stunning!
When working with florals you need to consider how much background shows. When flowers are spaced far apart, the individual 'square' can sometimes look like it is a totally different fabric and changes the 'look' of the design. And, as someone has already said, change the scale ... mix small, medium and large. Add in a little tone on tone. Not everything can be a 'star'. Some fabrics need to be the supporting actress!
Although it may not be what you were expecting, I think what you created on the bed looks like a very unique, original quilt instead of a 'cookie cutter' trip around the world! Hey, you're a designer and didn't know it!