When I look at your photo, I see stitching on the right side of your block. None of the stitching should be showing on the right side of the block.
I think that maybe you've had trouble working out how to do foundation piecing all by yourself - I would think that most people have someone demonstrate it for them. I know that I had trouble understanding how to pin the fabric on the unprinted side of the paper, flip the paper over, and sew on the printed line.
There are lots of sites on the internet that might help - the one below looks useful.
http://www.wikihow.com/Foundation-Piece-a-Quilt-Block