That is a most beautiful quilt. You asked for honest opinions, so thanks to bearisgray, we can be honest. It is much better after the changes she suggested. What I see now is not serious, but if it were on my wall I would change about three of the dark blue squares. Top center, bottom center and left bottom. Then there is another very light square right next to a very light triangle at right bottom.
I have gone through the drill of changing such a design, and it can drive you nuts. Good luck.