I think your quilting looks great. I can't believe it's your first time with free motion. Keep up the good work!
Also, I wanted to comment on your avatar. Your kitty looks like a baby version of my cat Bitty, except that the patch of gray comes down over Bitty's left eye. She's all white except for that gray patch on her head and a gray tail. I raised her on a bottle from when she was one week old and she's 3 years old now. She's definitely a quilting cat and loves to go into the sewing room with me.