I have to concentrate a long time picking just the right fabrics for a piece. I like having at least 4 fabrics in a quilt. I try to pick a "light" and a "medium" and a "dark." After just getting back to quilting after many years, I've forgotten most of what I thought I knew! Anyway, my point is, maybe you think it's not exactly what you want because it has 3 lights and 1 dark. That has a tendency for all lights to recede to the back visually, and the dark pieces pop out. I really like your pattern and the fabrics. Don't give up on this, because the fabrics are beautiful and you'll find a solution to make you feel comfortable.