I think its beautiful! I have a OBW on my design wall now.. it has been for a year lol. I think its the hardest part..decideding placement. I looked at yours and my eye went right to the white...use the white in the center as focal point..and then go where they lead you. We are so good at telling others what to do lol...Sweetie its your quilt..do it the way you love it : ) It will be beautiful!