From Tucker's page -
Chloe's delay would result in Kennedy and her dad could witnessing the entire foaling - need to take out the word 'could'?
most the night - most of the night?
Events page, para 6 - 'I waned to dance' - wanted?
Can't find anymore but kind of distracted by the content - beautiful photos of horse and quilts and your great writing - like hearing you speak! :D
K x