It's very bright and colorful, maybe not for a baby quilt but someone would fall in love with it. As others have said, no one knows the mistakes but you. Taking it to work and putting it on your chair is a good idea.
You are very kind to make a quilt for all the new mommies......
I've made quilts for gals I worked with but they were very plain and simple ones back then, I've improved a little in the last fifteen years.