We don't see many elephants on this board. Is Eddie ever cute. I think he needs some French knots or something for eyes, and a yarn or embroidery floss tail. I would give him a crazy little grin. I know how finicky these little stuffies can be to make. Your being to hard on yourself. I think you did a good job. Your friend is going to be thrilled! I know I would. Please post a picture when you've finished him. Thanks for posting.