You've probably found your solution by now. My only suggestion was to separate those two darkest blocks that touch. that being said, there could well be a reason you put them together. What helps to stand back a few feet and squint at the quilt. You will see shades and shapes that are more noticeable than when your eyes are open and taking in details
I really like your color choices and the fabrics. Nice job. Isn't it fun? I feel so at home here on the QB, knowing I'm in good company with other people going "nuts" by moving blocks around a jillion and one times. Sooner or later you will feel settled on your pattern. May have to walk out of the room for a while and back in. Usually the first response you have is the right one.
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