Bibliostone, I was thinking the same as Emma, that maybe a thin border on the peacock would set it off. Maybe in gold so it wouldn't interfere with the border. Otherwise, I agree with you that the second one works best. Those peacocks are so beautiful!
Pippa, Love your center and your stripes are perfect. I usually try to avoid stripped material because it shows so much when you're off.
Dotcom, That is going to be so pretty. Love your colors.