I think it look good for a first try, I really do. It really is something you have to practice to get the hang of as far as it looking fluid. When I first tried FMQ'ing, I used a paper stencil to get the feel for where to go with it, and then tore that paper off and just went to town with it. I love FMQ'ing now, and actually HATE having to stitch-in-the-ditch. That's how much fun it can be. :D