I'm with those that think it's beautiful already.. and the quilting as shown on your inspiration quilt would make this stunningly gorgeous! It may not be 'dancing' right now but with some of your own quilting emphasis in the negative white space I think it will be doing the cha-cha!
For what it's worth... In my (limited) experience, when I'm not impressed during the process I just persist forward with my plan and I always seem to fall in love with the final finished quilt
