happylab, I'm excited to see your fabrics!
Carol, I think your colors have the same value relationship as Bonnie's, just that she is working in darks and med. darks and you are working in med. and light. The only thing that gives me pause is your neutral/gold contrast, because the white paper doesn't stand out well on the yellow fabric in the grayscale photo. However, I think everyone using Bonnie's colors is going to face the same issue with their lighter golds (and I noticed some pretty light yellows in Bonnie's photos of her fabrics).
Wonky star, I just love your fabrics, especially the green! Is there someone you can call about the not-delivered bolt?