It looks really good Marcia. It is colorful and lots of pictures. The pictures are better than what I see in most sites. I get frustrated at not being able to see the fabric up close and yours is up close just right. I like the graphics you have used. The placement of everything is good.
the only things that bother me is the topper could go to the left some and be centered more but that may be something you have no control over I don't know.
I would have liked to see the topper go from one end to the other if you have that capability. Extend the pink of the topper. I agree the name of the shop could be bigger and bolder. I love the graphic with the store name you are using but it would be great if it could be wider.
The other thing is there is a lot of white empty space along the right side of your paragraph. I would either make your sentences longer so it fills in the space from left to right with the white being under the paragraph where you could add more words or pics or add something down the right side of the words. That blank space is abit too much for me.
But I think the look of the site is terrific!! and I think you have done a wonderful job on it!!!