It looks just the way it is supposed to..you are doing a great job!!

Brilliant idea with the black and white photo! I think it will be gorgeous.

[QUOTE=ghostrider;7324458]An easy way to see where your values are 'off' is to change your photos to black and white. It eliminates the distraction of color. I took the liberty of doing that to the one you posted.

http://i21.servimg.com/u/f21/13/49/59/13/repost10.jpg

See if it helps you get an idea of where to make placement changes, add value steps, etc. Your idea has great potential and you've made a very strong start; keep going!![/QUOTE



Brilliant idea!