Okay , here's my thought....I like the first colors best. I would change the way the "love you" is placed. I would make it a little smaller and put it in the lighter section in the center of the heart. The "love" moving down from left to right, the "you" moving up on the other side. I think it would look more like part of the design then something added as an afterthought......Just my thought!
I envy you getting to spend all that time in Hawaii! I hope you have a blast! :D :D :D

I like the idea you have about the placement of the words. That would be a cuter way to do it, and does look more planned.

The first one. It is more pleasing to the eye. In the second one the white background pulls the eye away from the red words.

i like the first one it is not as busy as the second one

I like the heart space on the first one - makes the Love You pop more. But I like the outside border on the second one. I think it would balance out the darker fabric and make the whole interior pop.

I like the second one--it makes a bolder statement.

Maybe smaller lettering and above the heart, just a thought... or even on the back with a smaller heart...

I like the first one

The first one is much easier to read!

I like the first one. Very pretty quilt.